Each one of these is really quite good. However, they go by too quickly. The wonderful detail you've achieved would be better suited with longer timing...they just end too quickly! The smoke is beautiful, but I don't think a cycle is the way to go on that one. It would flow much better if you just went ahead and drew out all the frames. The cycle serves to disrupt the flow. Great job overall.
Each one of these is really quite good. However, they go by too quickly. The wonderful detail you've achieved would be better suited with longer timing...they just end too quickly! The smoke is beautiful, but I don't think a cycle is the way to go on that one. It would flow much better if you just went ahead and drew out all the frames. The cycle serves to disrupt the flow. Great job overall.
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